Why my parents are my role model

Last term we did a narrative writing on who is our role model.Here's mine


Why my parents are my role model
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.

T	Title - What you will be explaining
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I	Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C	Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title	My role model.
Introduction	I picked my parents because I love them and they are the only people that truly care about me.
Information 1st element	My dad Ben I look up to my dad because he is always looking for things to do around the house.He is my everything and he only gets angry when we play music on sundays.He always does things like doing the dishes when it’s supposed to be my sisters.My dad always takes me fishing every saturday to catch some fish for us to eat.I love my dad and he loves me to.
Information 2nd element	My mum Mata I look up to my mum because she encourages me to always do good and follow the Lord and serve him with all my heart and all my soul and all my might.She never gives up no matter what even when she’s sick she still does it.I love my mum and she loves me to
Information 3rd element	My parents Mata and Ben I look up to my parents because they both have faith in me and always tells me to push past the limit especially for God.They are as funny as a monkey.They are like lions guiding their cubs.They are the best parents you could ever ask for.
Conclusion	I love my parents and they love me too.